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Breath

Confrontation, an altercation,
need to jus breath and feel some relaxation,
let that shit jus go,
all the stress u put 'pon yo'self, thats not what u need, no,
welcome the relief,
and it's only as severe as ur belief,
control what u can and no worries on the rest,
no regrets, ur doin' ur best,
we could all do better,
but it's not all that matters,
we hold ourselves to a much higher standard,
we are our worst critic and our #1 fan,
what can i say we're all part of greater plan,
couldn't even fathom the reason,
but everything changes like seasons,
jus when we get comfortable,
the winds switch on us makin it no longer suitable,
must except we never will know,
and really most will always be beyond our control,
we must all learn to live thru our soul,
cuz its truth mostly,
gotta pay attention closely,
if you ignore it, it can be happiness costly,
the force within, we must accept and not deny,
we must comply,

jus in order for us to get by. 

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  • sassykitty
    July 16
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    Well, I've never read a poem half written in text talk before but it doesn't really detract and seems to fit with the subject matter.
    Like the sentiments so clearly expressed as well as the almost brutal sense of honesty. Original and thought provoking. Thanks for sharing always like to read something different.

  • madamcb
    June 16
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    I truly enjoyed this write. I picked up on the rhythm, loved the content, the honesty, the being true to yourself theme.Many things really hit home with me, thanx, conni