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I propose….



That which burns in me intense

In tears
In laughs
In sudden breaths
In shrieking pain
In hollows of my heart
In vitality of my needs
In rhythm of my walks
In sophistication of my mind
In clumsiness of my actions
In pursuit of any bliss
In reflections of my guise to the world
In untold whispers from my lips
In obvious Oh! So obvious confessions of my eyes
In desires of my body
Sigh!
In every Element of my being,
is an eternal longing of your name
A yearning for you. 
You are my exaltation.

So what say, will you own me?

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    "will you own me" Great poem I really enjoyed this read ...hope you do well in the contest


  • loving.a.soldier
    June 14, 2008

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    WOW! So very good! Great write! I love it Nicely done!!! Good luck and thank you for entering

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