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Triumph With Me

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I stand now in awe of angelic forces
God's heavenly dynasty awaits his word
as the clock of infinity ticks.
Listen as I utter this message of truth.
Open your hearts; hate is barren
replenish the earth with love.
Ponder not to help the starving;
justified one day you shall stand
before the KING, beside me.
Knowing you have done some
wonderful things...in my many walks
of life I've planted seeds
to guide your footsteps today.
GOD is love....

Author notes

#1.quote inspired: quote is on the picture by Mother Teresa

#2.There is more hunger for love and appreciation in this world than for bread.
~ Mother Teresa



a tribute to a great lady: Mother Teresa
"written as the spirit of Mother Teresa speaking to all of us...."

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  • BellaD
    June 19, 2008

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    A beautiful write about God's love and His command that we love one another as He loves us. You have conveyed this very well. I especially like
    Open your hearts; hate is barren
    replenish the earth with love.
    Thank you for your entry.


  • shepherd23
    June 15, 2008

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    'hate is barren'
    I like this especially - there is no life in anti-lovely things
    I enjoyed reading this


  • Abson
    June 15, 2008

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    AN INSPIRING WRITE

    This is an inspiring piece of free verse poem that echoes through the run on lines;the need of the moment,everybody needs love, it is only this truth that can heal the world from starvation,afflictions,hatreds,vendettas,and so on and so forth.Your poem comes in a superior tone and the visual of mother Theresa makes this poem unique to the need of the moment.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    Ah..so angelic words bringing the truth into the forefront..well done my friend...thank you so much for entering my contest.....


  • angel62
    June 14, 2008
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    excellent

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