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~Posture~





Squander light daydreams,
posing aurora between tranquil mammary,  
like sublime corner
in harmonious eve curved lampshade,
idealizing silver trills,
celestial cadence of a beautiful melody,
trembling short sighs;
touching blowing zephyr
like light pollen
flowing in breeze with
cheerful posture.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

~spiritualangel~

Prompt: Picture
Credit: Lonely Lamperina by: Zach Virgilio
40 words

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Comments


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 21, 2008

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    Wonderful use of imagery and thought expressed within. Creative and so well composed. Nicely done!


  • jasminerose
    June 21, 2008

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    Beautiful imagery and a very creative take on the picture! Love where your muse took you with this one!!
    Wonderful entry, thank you for sharing your talented pen with us all!!
    Linda


  • penman gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    Excellent

    Very creative interpretation of the photo. Such a marvelous choice of words. Best of luck in the contest