I WAS GOING THROUGH THE CLOSET
KNOCKED YOUR OLD BOX OVER
THE ONE THAT SAYS IT’S ONLY YOURS
AND AS ALL THE PICTURES
FELL DOWN LIKE RAINDROPS
SPILLING OUT REMEMBER WHENS
OF US
I STARTED TO WONDER
JUST HOW LONG YOU’D BEEN
COLLECTING US
THERE WAS ONE OF US FROM HOMECOMING THAT YEAR
YOUR BIRTHDAY ON MY BED, AND ME IN MY SUN DRESS
PROM MY SENIOR YEAR, WHEN WE DANCED TO
I’LL WAIT FOR YOU
AND IT ONLY MEANT YOUR SENIOR YEAR STILL TO COME
AND AS ALL THE PICTURES
FELL DOWN LIKE RAINDROPS
SPILLING OUT REMEMBER WHENS
OF US
I STARTED TO WONDER
JUST HOW LONG YOU’D BEEN
COLLECTING US
I SAW THE PICTURES OF US ON THE SWINGS LATE AT NIGHT
GOOFING OFF WITH YOUR FAMILY THAT THANKSGIVING
YOU BUILDING THE TREE HOUSE IN OUR FIRST YARD
BACK WHEN WE FIRST GOT OUR LIFE TOGETHER SET WAY
AND AS ALL THE PICTURES
FELL DOWN LIKE RAINDROPS
SPILLING OUT REMEMBER WHENS
OF US
I STARTED TO WONDER
JUST HOW LONG YOU’D BEEN
COLLECTING US
AND THEN I KNEW…
SINCE THE DAY I BE-CAME-- YOURS----
A contest entry
- Write me Lyrics by Bryan-CarnelianHope.
800 points, ended June 25, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Lots of raw passion and emotion, I can feel it the words. Excellent job and thanks for entering my contest !



