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Possibilities Untold

Her name speaks of a thousand possibilities
Countless paths unfold at her precious feet
Bright eyes open up to an intriguing world
That dares her to paint vivid colors onto it
With splendor only she may bring with her time

Futures spread out in front of her
Roads she doesn't understand loom in the distance
Mountains that tear apart the skies wait
Calm lakes pull her toward their placid surfaces
Gentle meadows sing wind-songs that call her name

From her first breath to her last step
The world is for her to take
All she needs is a name history will grasp onto
To stand out in the ink-stained pages
A name that belongs to her and no other
[Kalika Hai]
A child of possibilities untold

Author notes

(Kalika Hai)?
Two names from two different books, I thought they kinda sounded pretty together .
Hai = Wyvernhail
Kalika = The Last Vampire 4 (or 5... not sure xD)

It was that or Fluffy Fishikins =]

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  • SilverMoonFeathers
    August 29, 2008

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    There is a person inside of eveyr raindrop a note resonating within every tune
    a girl that has yet to show who she is
    spread her colors like a rainbow for a special guy to find the end and find a pot of gold and find perfection and so many things to see so many posiblities


  • Mak
    July 20, 2008
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    GREAT!

    It's as simple as "I loved it!"


  • Fulabeans
    July 8, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Another great Poem Nephy, not that I excpect anything less You are so gifted...I'm taken aback by how wise you seem to be for such a young person.

    Don't ever stop writing Nephy, for I am forever a fan

    -stik-


  • manasvi
    July 6, 2008

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    well written!

    wow! this title instantly caught my attention and so i opened it and indeed i am glad i did cause it was beautifully expressed.. it sounds so hopeful and that is without doubt the true beauty of it.
    well written!


  • Lucian Valcor
    July 3, 2008
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    what origin is the name ?


  • Mostlyjoe
    June 15, 2008
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    Your theme of adding names. Wow.


  • Lucian Valcor
    June 14, 2008

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    great job i really like this one and the poem was so amazing at the same time you did a great job thank you for entering

    Lucian"


  • Midnight Raeven
    June 14, 2008

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    Kalika Hai is probably my absolute favorite girl name posted so far. It fits us so well and it is so different, I can imagine our with that name, it is better then Fluffy Fishikins as well

    I just adore this name!

    Amadahy Rayne

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