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companions


a treasured friend with pearly down
never sings a song of sorrow
always there to be a clown
a treasured friend with pearly down
songs of cheer to enchant the town
take my heart until tomorrow
a treasured friend with pearly down
never sings a song of sorrow

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blue bird triolet

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  • marlene47 silver member
    June 15

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    Loved the repeated lines, also liked pearly down, never singing a song of sorrow and taking your heart until tomorrow. Congratulations on the silver.
    Marlene

  • MangoMadness
    June 15
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    congratulations again! you are the best.


  • Swan song gold member
    June 14
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    Yes I love triolets!!!! Excellent poem