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BatFreak

Precious life burn down to death,
Tragic existence mere ambers left.
Hollow beings made to wonder,
Memories none forget to ponder.
Undo good deeds and inner light,
Envelop yourself unto the night.

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  • first forgotten
    June 14, 2008

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    this is very powerful, and real deep. i love the diction, amazing. this poem is very expressive, dark. love it! the last line is my favorite. great work.