Sometimes i wonder if your alive, (I know it's)
I can't help but feel so deprived,
One year, It's been one year,
One year
I can't say that I'll change my mind, (I miss her)
It's those feelings that are so hard to hide,
Chorus
With every step i take towards you, You know exactly what to do, There's no button, i can not undo, Till the bullet shoots thru, Then you bury yourself along with you lies, One day you'll wake up so surprised, With a gun pointing right at your beautiful eyes, One day your gonna make up your mind,
Sometimes i wonder if your choice was right, (It wasn't)
You must have chosen without opening your eyes,
One year, It's been one year, One year, Its been one year...
repeat chorus
With every step i take towards you, You know exactly what to do, There's no button, i can not undo, Till the bullet shoots thru,
Then you bury yourself along with you lies, One day you'll wake up so surprised, With a gun pointing right at your beautiful eyes, One day your gonna make up your mind,
Author notes
direct link to the actual song please listen to it, www.mypsace.com/thedanbrowndemos this song means alot to me, thanks for the contest wish there were more like this one
A contest entry
- Write me Lyrics by Bryan-CarnelianHope.
800 points, ended June 25, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Not your conventional poet but a solo musician also
Comments
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this is very sad... it sounds like music to me! i do, however, like this write very much. expressive, good diction, good story, and nice rythm.
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