Where were you when I was ecstatic?
When I was lovesick or even homesick?
Where were you when life was great?
When everything, I could locate?
Where were you when my feelings got messed around?
When I got thrown around then chucked to the ground?
Where were you when I needed you?
Where were you when there were only few?
Where were you when I stood alone?
Whenever I cried on the phone?
Where were you when my pillow became wet?
When I cried myself to sleep, never to forget?
Where were you when the pain was unbearable?
When the hurt was so bad, I had to be careful?
You were there.
You were there through the comfort
You were there through the blissful.
You were there through the hurt.
You were there through the tearful.
You were there, but I never saw you.
Author notes
Transatlanticism
A contest entry
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Such a cryptic feeling here. Questions to be pondered!
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Hey Ashy darlin!!!!!!! OMG tht was the most beautiful poem i've ever read, but then again all your poems are gorgeous and have so much meaning!!
Love you xxxxxxx Lots of Love your Bee Bee xxxxxxx
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hey ash this is candy!!
no shock that was amazing!! you are such a beautiful poet and you have a real talent girl!! I Luv Ya xxx candy xxx -
It's like you carry around the memory of this person no matter where you go.
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This is great.. amazingly written thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
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Such a melancholic piece this is especially with the last line giving this piece that great impact for the reader to feel the emotion, too . . .
. . . nice write, all in all; the repetitiveness got me almost off track, just almost
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