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Renderings

The charcoal smudges
and an eye
becomes
  your
    eye

Stopping at
half a face
you
  become
    real

enough to touch.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    Interesting write

    It makes one wonder are we really seeing what we think we are within the mirrors or is there something beyond


  • ErrantHeart
    August 12, 2008
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    I'll have to simmer on this a bit.

    But...

    I likey. Really really likey!

  • Just4u
    June 14, 2008
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    Art NOT for art's sake...

    Hugs...Eddy

    • Apparition
      June 16, 2008
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      Sometimes is more a curse than a gift or talent. LOL
      Hi...


  • leo2
    June 14, 2008

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    I filled in the blanks on this one, with your permission of course..lol. A tender, touching rendering of the soul.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

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