song from chirping bird
syllables incomprehensible,
cries turned into musings
inherited from birth,
like its wings
melody preserved
sweetness unsoiled,
soothes pulsating heart,
listened amid attention
universal song
from free heart,
blow melody
unaware of audience
open as breeze
psychic wants untouched,
devoid of idol
tune in spontaneous
Author notes
five words
compassion, kindness, love, care, concern
'I did not read the rules'.
A contest entry
- A Moment in Forever by Nephlim.
600 points, ended June 16, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely!
What a lovely poem....just beautiful...who does not love to hear the cuckoo...
All the best in the contest!
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Thanks for following most of the rules :P
Rule crimson lies someone read the rules wrong 
But that's alright 
. Onto commenting!
I love the details you put in here, so soft and tender. Another one of the few poems that managed to capture a moment without having to make it about love ^-^. Good luck!
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This is such a lovely write and you did so well on the prompt here. "unaware of audience", I loved this part. Well done and all the best for the contest.
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Yummy
I love this one to, ooh.. you is good with written.
CinfullyDelicious pointed out the same portions that I love much.
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melody preserved
sweetness unsoiled,
soothes pulsating heart,
listened amid attention
Good to be reading something from you again my brother, I do quite like this and you included the words so well through-out
Good luck with it in the contest
Cin
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