I fall to you.
Worshiping the ground you walk on.
Willing to do anything for you.
But you just keep walking on.
Like i was never apart of your life.
My innocence robbed from me,
By the cruelness of your soul.
Not noticeing, mostly not caring.
As you see the tears stream down.
You laugh it off.
It makes you feel powerful,
Knowing you did this.
Knowing your call makes me run,
Straight into your undeserving arms.
You decived me,
But you dont care.
From now on, neither do I.
So watch as this walks away,
The best thing you ever had.
Author notes
2- " Deception plastered masks to innocents blooming roses, still the wind beckons for voice, and I fall to his grave" Stephanie Wood
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Comments
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This piece has a lot to it, and the only part that I questioned was the last two lines, because using such a common phrase to end a beautiful piece takes away from it just a little bit, so if you were to ever re-think the editing on it, that would be my suggestion
Other than that, I really like what you have here. Great job, and thanks for your entry!
Amanda -
wow!, i really think i like this alot ^_^
hehehe especially the ending, its powerful, and yet funny...hehe.
and this is just packed full of emotions!
thanks for entering and good luck
stephanie
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