Brina Carey deep in your soul
With her name such love shall extol
Brina born as a protector
In your hearts you will except her
Carey, your river princess
A Celtic queen and nothing less
Brina Carey born of your love
Sent down from the Goddess above
Brina Brina, let's sing her name
The song and dance within your flame
Her presence strong surrounding light
I give you Brina's song tonight
Brina Carey deep in your soul
In your hearts you will except her
Author notes
Brina: female Celtic protector
Carey: Male Irish/Celtic/Cornish Irish: The name of a castle. Celtic: From the river. Cornish: The loved one. A boy or girl's name.
The form is a Kyrielle Sonnet
A contest entry
- Baby Names by Lucian Valcor.
600 points, ended July 4, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ooh, this poem was exactly what we were hoping to read, you have chosen a name and made a loving poem around it.
Wonderfully written poem surrounding such a beautiful name, I agree with my Husband. Not too over the top, yet you don't see it often.
Amadahy Rayne -
this was beautiful i agree with the lady below me, you did a great job on the poem and name brina carey i like it brina is different but not to off the wall nice work and good luck in the contest
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this was beautiful...and i love the names! they fit together really well. aww, if only i had that girl! 
well, i love me lil alex! 
sweet rhyming poem! 
♥sissy
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