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rememberance doesn't mean dwelling

late at night
i lay down my key
every unbidden thought, tear, and smile
wells forth to be expressed

but only to my shadowed ceiling
and the lost black-beetle crawling

down the dusky wall

late, after the sun has long set and no color lights the sky
and i will soon be dragged from what should have been my own slumber
i lay here
thinking of myself, i wish

but more honestly of you and your broad shoulders

i used to lie in the shadows of you
pretending, hoping, dreaming... but never lonely

 

late, now, when every sane person should have closed their eyes
i pour my mind and imagination into the words of others
living, just for this moment through their words
knowing that tomorrow, yes the swiftly approaching tomorrow
i will be back on my own two all too practical, slightly jaded feet
the memory of what once was... will be replaced
with a dream of my tomorrow

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  • Kingfogger
    June 25
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    Very nice

    Well, sir, being that you seem to enjoy my poetry I felt I should comment on other of yours, and I must say that you do not disapoint. I can think of nothing to say really except very well written. Have you tried getting any of your poetry published, because you really should.

    kingfogger