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Here I Lie

You burned your way into my heart, scortching all that was left
revealing secrets forever kept
my love for you, it burned true
but here i lie broken, burned by you.
the flame dims to a spark
alone again, lying in the dark.

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  • awaiting.deletion
    June 16, 2008

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    Simple yet effective, you get your point across quite well. Hm...you're a relatively interesting creature, quite pathetic...yet...interesting...yes...