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Me...In Pieces

doll face
 
 
Fallen

  I can't get up

Shattered images of self
Lying exposed amidst the ground

I wish I could forget all this
Worthless ambitions just to see
what I can make of myself

  Right now, I'm a mess


Picking up the reminense of memories faded
A heart so jaded
With a face that's fractured by emotions that long to be gone

Right now, I'll just lie here
In brokenness...wondering

When will my life return?
 

Author notes

Pic Credit: http://ypsoon.deviantart.com/art/The-Doll-69381511

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  • movedon
    July 24, 2008

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    I love the yellow lines you added. It was genius. I enjoyed reading this. Great poem Chris.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • Lady Michaella
    July 5, 2008
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    Thanks for entering! A great interpretation of the picture!


  • peridotPixi
    June 14, 2008

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    i love the detials you have used in this poem and the wonderful picture you have used also i can feel this poem deeply and i love the last line how you ask when will my life return, as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy