As I walk through the door,
the wrap around she was wearing,
falls to the floor.
Words gasp from my lips,
inaudible for her to hear,
"oh, to be found in Jesus
such a voluptuous delight".
My thoughts run wild, will the lust
I have for her, be fulfilled this night?
A thousand ideas fill my head,
how will I get this lovely into bed?
Will I use charm, wit, humor or maybe money.
Just then, all my dreams come true,
as she sings to me;
"Happy Anniversary, To You, Honey".
Author notes
By ~ Maxboy
Background ~ Red Vixen By ~ Little Feather
Written for a contest-The Wrap Around
Silver,
In a list
A contest entry
- For New and Trophy Lacking by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended July 16, 74 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #127 One for the Men (adult only please) by daviscth.
300 points, ends September 10, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
PLEASE COMMENT SO I CAN LEARN
Comments
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LOL. A delightful take on the picture prompt. I just love the imagery in this and the background is awesome. Thanks for your entry.
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Cute
I really like,
the anticipation it created was great.
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Thank you for the applause and comment. I am happy you enjoyed it.
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this is so cute i loved it
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Thank you for the applause and comment.
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Good write. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Thank you for the comment.
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This is funny and cute at the same time you got me nice write.
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Thanks for the great comment and the applause. I thought the ending was a little bit of a twist.
Thanks Again
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This is funny!
I really like it!
Good luck in your contest !
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Thank you very much.
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You seem to be doing great all on your own,
I thought it was wonderfully done and with cute humor. thanx for entering my contest and good luck.
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This write kind of swept me away, for I was not expecting anything like this to come from my prompt, but in reconsideration I now thank you for it and must say that you are brave to have accepted such a prompt
at any rate, and you attempted writing for it, so for that alone I tip my hat lol wishing you well in the contest lol
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Silver-Another First
Thank you so much, my first silver and the highest one to date, I am excited. I new without looking that the Captn crunched it. When I first saw the contest, I thought "The Wrap Around", was to be the prompt. I already had that running around in my head when I saw the actual prompt. I thought , well, I can do something with that, so here we are. I had no idea what you were after. In the future, you might have to consider, how a shallow thinker (me) might interpret a deep prompt. Then, what is the worst that MAX will do with this? I knew I was going to be in left field with this, my biggest fear was that I might offend you with it. Thank you for all the applause, your great comments and most of all, the positive support you have given. I hope you know just how much that means to me.MAXBOY
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great poem!
i liked it alot!!
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Thank You
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your welcome!!
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so lovely.
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Thank You
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This is so lovely, the humour and the sincerity of your words were wonderful to read. And I loved the ending, it was perfect. Well done and all the best for the contest.
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Thank you so much. I had a lot of fun writing it. My wife got a kick out of it as well. Maybe, since our next anniversary is eleven months away. I am happy that you liked it.
Thanks
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a good poem, i like the sensuality here with the touch of humour, and the ending is nice with a special occasion.
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Thank you for the kind comments, I do mean kind. Thank you for the applause as well. But, you are the one that deserves all the credits.
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