As I walk through the door,
the wrap around she was wearing,
falls to the floor.
Words gasp from my lips,
inaudible for her to hear,
"oh, to be found in Jesus
such a voluptuous delight".
My thoughts run wild, will the lust
I have for her, be fulfilled this night?
A thousand ideas fill my head,
how will I get this lovely into bed?
Will I use charm, wit, humor or maybe money.
Just then, all my dreams come true,
as she sings to me;
"Happy Anniversary, To You, Honey".
Author notes
By ~ Maxboy
Background ~ Red Vixen ~ By ~ Little Eagle
Written for a contest-The Wrap Around
Gold,Silver,HM
In a list
- #1~Trophies ~ GOLD • next in list
- Humor • next in list
- Adult • next in list
- #2~Trophies ~ SILVER • next in list
A contest entry
- #127 One for the Men (adult only please) by daviscth.
300 points, ended September 4, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happy Birthday, J aime coudre by catz.
1200 points, ended October 19, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
PLEASE COMMENT SO I CAN LEARN
Comments
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Very sweet indeed. I love this poem. It said so much about your love for your beautiful wife. Such Romance between couples is sadly missing a lot these days and it always delights me to see that it is alive and well. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Thank you very much for the applause and your wonderful comment girl, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Aww how cute!
I love the cutsey little twist at the end.
Bravo!!!
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Thank you very much for your comment, I am happy you liked my write.
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I would have hated it
aww this is pretty. had you written any other ending besides this one I am sorry to say I probably would have hated it, but the idea that you wrote it for your wife is just beautiful. I absolutely love it. Great job, and thanks for entering my contest.
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Thank you for your wonderful comment and applause, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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excellent
Charm wit and money
Plus love...
Great combinations for sensual romance
Good luck in the contest
It's a winner in my book
Hugs
Your lil sis
Susan~~~
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Thank you very much sis, I am very happy you liked my write, but I am much more pleased to see you are up and around.
Thanks Sis
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Of course you know that I love this one. And yes you do use charm, wit and always your humor but never money. We might need to talk a little more about that. Could work for me.
Love You
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hahaha You are funny honey, what ever it takes to work.
Love You Too
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Another great write you have here!
Congratulations to you on your two trophies
here my friend. Well done and all the best to
you in this next contest here. I hope that you
do well with it!
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Thank you again Jeremy for the reads, I am pleased you have enjoyed my writes.
Thanks
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Congratulations on the Shiny Cups!!!
And yes, sometimes dreams do come true. Wishing you many more happy dreams!! 
& 
-Cyn
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Thank you very much Cyn, I am happy you liked my write, I keep dreaming but it isn't happening.
Thanks
Don
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This poem has a very sweet and tender feel to it. And romantic (though that probably isn't the best thing to take from me since I've been blamed for my whole life I know nothing about romanticism).
anyway, thank you for entering!
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Thank you very much for your great comment.
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Aww!
Cute, and if true, then lucky for you. Peace- Syah
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Thank you very much for your comment, no not true, but would be nice for someone.
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simply priceless
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Thank you very much for the comment.
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I think I remember this one...thanks for your enry and good luck lol
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Thank you for your comment. This one was a big surprise to you, I think it was so far off the wall from what you were looking for.
Thanks Smiles
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Maxboy, you are right on one level-it did take me by shock, but on another level its an awesome piece, hence your Gold and other honors attached to it, thanks again for re-entering it for my contest lol hope you're are grand, and that all is well for you lol
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welll welllll what a surprise. Wasn't expecting that ending. Very good. I also love both the picture and the background. Great job in picking them out. And the color also goes well because I always think of the color red as passion. The write itself is very nice. I enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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Thank you, I am pleased you liked the surprise ending.
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Oh for the good old days...Thanks for the birthday wish
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Thank you very much, I hope all your Birthday wishes come true.
Don
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You are very welcome, happy birthday and anniversary.
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Well Well This indeed is a aother good write that you have bought to the contest I enjoyed the read Great wording throughout thanks for your entry be well
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.
Don
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After she reads this, I think we better keep an eye on her... she'll be chasing hubby around the bed demanding her birthday present
A cool poem, Maxboy. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest
Dee
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Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention, I hope she got her birthday wish.
Don
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Thank you Dee, I'm pleased you enjoyed it and felt it fit. Hopefully hubby pays off, for his sake.
Thanks
Don
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How old am I? When I think "wrap around" I think sports, a quick move that allows thew player to quickly wrap around the defender...yeah, like I said, I'm old, I've forgotten all that good stuff!
But as I remember, that is a very good anniversary present.
And I'll join in on the best wishes for J aime Coudre.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment and what did happen to those very nice surprise presents.
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ummm i dont think this is somthing i can give to my mom
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I am sorry, I thought the anniversary aspect would have been ok, but I can remove it.
Don
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Maybe i can give it to my step dad to give to her...Ahhhh bad images lol
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hahaha I know what you mean, the thought of parents, by the children.
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Don
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Thank you! Again very beautiful and sweet!!!
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This is a beautiful write, i enjoyed it. However you didnt update you authors notes, please go back and update it so i dont have to disqualify you. Thank you for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck!!! Keep up the great work!
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
The option is in the AN.
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This is really sweet and quite the
anniversary present! lol Well done
and all the best to you in this contest.
I love your background! Thanks a lot for
sharing this one here!
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Thank you for the great comment.
Don
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This is really Cute! I Loved It!
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I am really happy you enjoyed my poem.
Thanks Again
Don
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Nice one
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Thank you for the nice comment.
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Thank you so much for the Great comment.
Don
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Cute humour!
This gave me a giggle!
The ending was fab, I never expected it!
Good luck and thanks for entering
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Thank you very much for the wonderful comment.
Don
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LOL. A delightful take on the picture prompt. I just love the imagery in this and the background is awesome. Thanks for your entry.
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!! WOW !!
Thank you so much for the GOLD TROPHY, I am very happy you enjoyed my poem.
I could hardly believe how well the poem I wrote, over two months ago, tied in with your picture prompt.
Thank You Again
Don
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Thank you for your wonderful comment.
Tammy does beautiful backgrounds.
Thanks Again
Don
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Cute
I really like,
the anticipation it created was great.
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Thank you for the applause and comment. I am happy you enjoyed it.
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this is so cute i loved it
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Thank you for the applause and comment.
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Good write. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Thank you for the comment.
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This is funny and cute at the same time you got me nice write.
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Thanks for the great comment and the applause. I thought the ending was a little bit of a twist.
Thanks Again
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This is funny!
I really like it!
Good luck in your contest !
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Thank you very much.
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You seem to be doing great all on your own,
I thought it was wonderfully done and with cute humor. thanx for entering my contest and good luck.
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This write kind of swept me away, for I was not expecting anything like this to come from my prompt, but in reconsideration I now thank you for it and must say that you are brave to have accepted such a prompt
at any rate, and you attempted writing for it, so for that alone I tip my hat lol wishing you well in the contest lol
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Silver-Another First
Thank you so much, my first silver and the highest one to date, I am excited. I new without looking that the Captn crunched it. When I first saw the contest, I thought "The Wrap Around", was to be the prompt. I already had that running around in my head when I saw the actual prompt. I thought , well, I can do something with that, so here we are. I had no idea what you were after. In the future, you might have to consider, how a shallow thinker (me) might interpret a deep prompt. Then, what is the worst that MAX will do with this? I knew I was going to be in left field with this, my biggest fear was that I might offend you with it. Thank you for all the applause, your great comments and most of all, the positive support you have given. I hope you know just how much that means to me.MAXBOY
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great poem!
i liked it alot!!
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Thank You
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your welcome!!
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so lovely.
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Thank You
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This is so lovely, the humour and the sincerity of your words were wonderful to read. And I loved the ending, it was perfect. Well done and all the best for the contest.
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Thank you so much. I had a lot of fun writing it. My wife got a kick out of it as well. Maybe, since our next anniversary is eleven months away. I am happy that you liked it.
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a good poem, i like the sensuality here with the touch of humour, and the ending is nice with a special occasion.
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Thank you for the kind comments, I do mean kind. Thank you for the applause as well. But, you are the one that deserves all the credits.
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