amongst the navy skies
and twinkling stars
we found our forever
and mingled it
with jokes aplenty
as shooting stars
touched our hearts
and sweet conversations
were made over
coffee
we danced
among the moonlight
as raindrops drenched
lonely souls
which became one
----------------
as time comes
to a standstill,
even conversations
have to end and
dreams have to be
s hatt er ed
for dreams are never
as they seem
A contest entry
- Lyrics Everywhere by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended June 15, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Then There Were Six by Tercil.
450 points, ended June 21, 2008, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a lovely feel about the flow in this, and nie story too, well, I'll put it in the final ten, good luck,
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Beautiful.
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"I'm here without you, but your still in my dreams."
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