light falling snow,
white drumming spreads
approaching hearts’ soft beating
passion glances -
anticipation turns, sways
into new love’s shared space
Author notes
Picture prompt =>
http://breedstock.deviantart.com/art/candy-hearts-8860176
A contest entry
- 10/20/30 Another Quickie by Nighttime angel.
725 points, ended June 14, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn your GREEN trophy into GOLD by Sweet Sorrow.
400 points, ended June 21, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really enjoyed the imagery in this wonderfully written piece. Thank you for posting in my contest.
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Excellent
Such a wonderful creation for the contest. So very well one. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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A feeling of serenity reflects in this poem. Good imagery as well. Thanks for sharing
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A very beautiful response to the picture.Lovely inagery indeed
Congrats on your shiny emerald
Gaylene
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I really enjoyed your poem. this poem is very calming and I love it. I like your take on the prompt. very outside of the box feel to it.
good luck
kat
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this is a wonderful take on the prompt!
its delightfully calm & serene
loved it.
good luck in the contest!
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Lovely take Think only "not dark" poem in this lol. Good Luck
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