an ice cold beauty
her heart lies dormant in chains
men with their unfaithful love
will never touch her again
Author notes
Picture is the Prompt
Please Credit the Artist:
http://breedstock.deviantart.com/art/candy-hearts-88601767
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/20/30 Another Quickie by Nighttime angel.
725 points, ended June 14, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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much congrats
Much congrats to you for your great quickie work here-I just adore the challenge of these kinds of contests and it takes great talent and creativity! Great job!
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I really loved this poem of yours. excellent take on the prompt. I love the 2nd line a lot. the imagery through out this poem is fantastic.
good luck
kat
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thank you
it was an interesting prompt to work from & i enjoyed the challenge. thanks for the HM.
~ tim
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A heart of ice, great write. Good luck.
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Loved this!
men with their unfaithful love
will never touch her again
Great work
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"her heart lies dormant in chains" - Best line in the poem, in my opinion. LOVE IT! and there is a nice rhyme to it too. GOOD LUCK
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Nicely Done Goodluck
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