Underneath halfway decent lights
the people sway
motionless enchantment vibrates
off small grins and eye language
how shall i break this to you love?
No need you say wistfully
but the song is too fast
and no one sways now
Simplicity becomes nothing under the lights
calling unnecessary groans from the crowd
How shall i say this love?
You break me.
The lights dim to black
enchantment ceases to thrive
off of the lifeless eyes of your shock
the crowd grows restless
under my poisoned words
the music continues faster now
the music slows along with your breathing
the music is stopping
And so am I
A contest entry
- That was you? Omg I'm sorry ( For Everyone :] ) by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
450 points, ended June 24, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, explain what you thought, no vagueness alowed.
Comments
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Wow this is very well written and worded so greatly. I liked it alot. I could picture everything as i read. Well thanks for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck.
for you. 
xxx...<3..
RAWR -
You're finally writing again!!!
HOORAH!!!
*dances*
I loved it. Absolutely wonderful, as usual. You paint such beautiful images,even if they arent meant to be beautiful. I always love your way with words.
And I love you more!!!! =D
♥
Raye
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