Does it really matter,
What I have to say?
You're right, I'm wrong,
It's always your way.
Take my knowledge,
Grind it into the ground.
You are older and wiser,
My wisdom is unfound.
My opinions don't count,
They're obliterated to dust.
Why shouldn't they be?
Yours are the ones to trust.
What I have learned,
Can't hold up at all.
Your research and "knowledge",
Will still stand tall.
I give up, you win,
You're right I suppose.
I'll just mold myself in,
And keep my mouth closed.
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My parents upset me. This is my anthem.
Please tell me what you think
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and hey, i just realized, i already commented this.. bwaha!
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I love you! and just realized i havent commented your poems in a really long time, this was good amber, and totally relatable. parents are never wrong, even when they really are.
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awesome write! i think everyone can relate to this because no doubt we have all felt this way about our parents as we've grown up.
loved it
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very well writ. i like to give dicks like this the one finger salute.
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awesome write !!! THAT IS AWESOME!
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Quite an anthem, indeed but hey, without parents, how are we even going to exist here?
My favorite line is the second to the last:
"I'll just mold myself in"
Kind of like saying, I'll create a worthy self inside me whilst listening to you ^^
Nice write, all in all n.n -
well miss amber.. that's parents for you.. sometimes its just better to agree with them instead of voicing your opinion you know? I love you amber.
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wow...
and what an anthem this is.
I used to write like this - but now my words have hurt many...
I would advise you to use a white text instead of black,
it's a bit hard to read without having to highlight the words.
I thank you for sharing this piece,
You really are not alone here,
I just escaped my hell not too long ago.
and by next month i will forever be parted from it.
My best wishes - and my heart goes out to you,
~*SL*~
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