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Where Are You?

Rain falling as ice,
Love dangling in air.
Misery is all around.
Are you out there?
My only true love.

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  • Angels hero
    June 14, 2008

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    I am here my love I never left you nor will I forsake you. Congratulations on the honorable winner. *hugs**hugs* *hugs* *hugs*

  • Nighttime angel
    June 13, 2008

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    I find myself asking this question all the time. personally I have finally given up looking. oops sorry.. excellent take on the prompt. something obviously I can relate to, like you couldn't tell.

    outstanding poem

    good luck

    kat


  • Xianaria gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    Are you out there?

    i can relate...when the one we love isn't around, all else seems to fall apart.

    well done!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    June 13, 2008
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    Aww somewhere he's there lol Nice take Good Luck


  • Celtic Legend
    June 13, 2008
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    Oohh!!! really good! hope you win!

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