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Frustration

she holds the
icing sugar tea cup
brittle as egg shell
in white velvet hands,

stares straight ahead,
and squeezes.

Author notes

http://breedstock.deviantart.com/art/candy-hearts-88601767

http://my-goddess.deviantart.com/art/Cupcake-82191258

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Comments

  • Nighttime angel
    June 13, 2008

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    I like your take on the prompt. I do have a question for you.. what is with the second link?


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    wooo, strong piece! I like how you portray soo much with very little wording. Great take on the prompt! Good Luck