Dangling
d
o
w
n
desires hope
in Death's forest
l-i-f-e hangs by chains.
Pleasures are no more,
as I notice haunted memories.
Author notes
20 words
Please Credit the Artist:
http://breedstock.deviantart.com/art/candy-hearts-88601767
I tried yet again. Hope you like.
A contest entry
- 10/20/30 Another Quickie by Nighttime angel.
725 points, ended June 14, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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like heck no..! i love it....! you always write such wonderful words.... thanks for sharing and congreats on the HM
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Honorable winnner, no doubt there. Congrats with the win. I see that even with such a short piece, you still managed to pour out emotions. Something I would consider brilliant! Excellent write!
blessed be
-Blanche
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Love the layout, and the emotion sitll delievered even though a shorter piece, well done
Ur
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wow.. excellent take on the picture. a bit sad to me, and quite dark. I can relate to the overall feelings through out this poem. particularly the last 2 lines.
good luck
kat
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I know some people don't like when poets write this way...but I always think it's interesting...and really draws emotion and imagery if done right. (i mean, not too much going on to make it look too busy...i guess they call it dirty pretty? I could be wrong)...any way, you have really pulled it off well. Good Luck
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Oooh loverly.
What a great take on the prompt.
Excellent job.
Me likey!!!
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Great take Dear Good Luck
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