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Her Parasol

Missing image

Clothed in

claret passions.

Her valentine lips

offer love's candy.

 

Memory's parasol

shades

from fingers

craving sugar,

but never hearts.

Author notes

20 words
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  • Nighttime angel
    June 13, 2008

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    Fantastic

    I absolutely love this poem of yours.. excellent take on the prompt. I love the second stanza the best, especially the last 2 lines.

    this poem is outstanding..

    good luck

    kat


  • sailor ptolema
    June 13, 2008
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    bravo!!!

    oh, i love this!
    written with an elegant pen!
    well done!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    June 13, 2008
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    Love It nice job good luck