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Life

Life’s brilliance
beacon mirrored reflection
surrounded love
adapt to experiences
free to be ……..

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  • stavykm gold member
    July 26

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    Just Brilliant

    So few words done with such mastery!!! I loved this poem and the picture goes well with your write. Excellent choice of vocabulary into expressing life so beautifully. Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry with me. You are just wonderful...
    Much Love
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie


  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    July 25

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    You are such a good

    poetess and you have so much to say with such a fabulous point of view, I really wish you would find your muse and write more, I'm sure allot would agree


  • CherylAnn
    June 23

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    Spoken like a true poet...Deep impressions within the mind searching to be free in design...Each experience in life unfolds in levels to bring on that winning freedoms voice...Brilliantly penned as always sis...Amazingly worded and wonderfully put...
    Blessings and Love
    ~CherylAnn~


  • Mr Majenta gold member
    June 17

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    you do with five words what i barely achieve with five hundred.
    it's kinda like being drunk (or being me sober): can't remember what just happened, but i know i enjoyed it.


  • Walking shadow
    June 16

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    Another mook moment

    With such words your pen tells it all. Such powerful verses. You are such a gifted poet. You do not need a ton of words to power your poems. I seen some long ones of yours and they kick butt as well. Mook you always know how to hit hard. Another home run for you. Great job.

  • LadyLuff
    June 15
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    aww!
    cool poem!
    thanks for sharing!!

  • penman gold member
    June 15
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    Wonderful

    Short, but so full of truth. Thank you for sharing.

  • June-bug
    June 15

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    Awesome Job..So wise the words..fantastic ending..free to be free. right now this has me thinking of so many things going on in my life at this moment. Thanks for the pleasure of the read.


  • Quiet places gold member
    June 14

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    Outstanding!

    An amazing choice of words in this message! Sets your reader free in thought. Like a new truth. Excellent! Don


  • rustynite silver member
    June 13

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    Me..
    Live,
    love others
    Love is expected
    in return.
    Mirrors reflect
    light. It has none
    within.
    It comes from me.
    You.

    I sure liked these words.




  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 13

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    Beautiful. My good bad girl is so deep and brilliant. This is wonderful. So good to see you writing again.

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