The sky feels calm
The air is peaceful
Another moonless night
It worries no one
The moon’s just tucked away
Resting her beams
She’ll glow again tomorrow
Slowly showing more of herself
Night by night
Until she’s revealed in full glory
Then slips away again to restore
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wonderful use of imagery and the moon resting her beams is a great metaphor for the human need to take time out to recharge the batteries and face the everyday once again. well done, keep the ink flowing from your pen.
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I love that she's just "resting her beams." There's a simplicity here, like that's a line you might tell a child, and yet it works in expressing the moment.
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Great work here...i cant really say much its hard to find a certain line so i'm just gonna have to leave it at great job!!
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