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Nightmare II

Sadly turn, the reasons there
Through the curtains, shivering, bare
Slipping towards you, dark as shadows
More are coming, creeping in windows
Terror is building, blindly ripping
Turn to run, falter into stumbling, tripping
Sickly claws, reaching for you
Wake to light, as they start to chew

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  • Interesting! I couldn't pull away from the poem as i read it. I like that it created suspense as I progressed from begining to end. good job.

  • WOW... That was crazy and I loved it! You can really build authentic emotions in your writing!