Blindness fills my passionate soul
I see the truths
but have ignored them in every angle;
my sweet darling
I have been watching you from afar
and you are not in love with me
sweet dear heart
you dear are in love with her
listen to the beating of your heart
it beats louder than you realize
maybe this is what holds back my heart
She peaks behind the golden mountain
silver raindrops fall from the clouds above her
How can a love so golden as yours
be untouched
do not hold back
where have you gone to?
Let your passion run widely
Just let it fly free
I sit in the shadows among the trees below
Thinking about you day and night
I dream of love
Deeper that the deepest realms
Walking along golden bricks
As the twinkles dance in your eyes
I can see the sun’s rays
Shining everywhere;
My heart dances among the silver lined clouds
Oh dearest just let me dream
Dream of stars sparkling like diamonds
Dream of the moon whisping away the platinum
An eruption of unrequited love for you.
Waterfalls pour over golden waters
I am dancing around in the Garden of Eden
This is where this love is
No where else can it be
Let your heart beat freely
Listen to your soul
And dearest love deep within me
hidden in secrets ever so carefully;
Wherever your heart carries you
embrace it.
Author notes
I have a very very deep need to write these feelings out. So anyone in particular (Jamey) who doesn't completely understand everything needs to stop judging me and just accept me for who I am. I am sorry. I think I am going to feature this to.
Option #3: Lusting after somebody & [you're taken].
Option #1: (yournogoodforme contest)
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Very Good
Waterfalls pour over golden waters
I am dancing around in the Garden of Eden
This is where this love is
No where else can it be
Let your heart beat freely
Listen to your soul
Very beautiful
Very origional
Rick
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wow.. did I enter this contest. Thank you for your comment. I forgot about this poem.
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Cute in a stalker kind of way LOL. Well penned antry, that shows potential. Thanks for the entry.
Serenity
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Ah, I remember this poem! Incredible. Full of definite emotion and basically just everything. Thank you for entering & best of luck ! ♥
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Wow, this put me in complete awe. You have a such a way of wording things. This poem proves you have talent :]
" My heart dances among the silver lined clouds
Oh dearest just let me dream
Dream of stars sparkling like diamonds
Dream of the moon whisping away the platinum
An eruption of unrequited love for you."
I loved the imagery in those lines;; very vivid and just everything about them was beautiful. I can sense the little bit of pain lingering in this piece;; amazing ! Keep writing and thanks for entering :] <3
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I love you mommy!!!!!!!!
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my lil daughter thanks for the comment
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such beautiful language. I especially liked "I am dancing around in the Garden of Eden"--expresses a passion for 'forbidden fruit' of a sort, unrequited love. Excellent!
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May the one you wait for be worth the wait and the pain you carry
Love is a blessing we each have such a little chance at. May your be worththe wait...mac
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oh my ..lady ..
you touched that romantic in me with piece! very nice ,sweet words of love! nice job you big romantic you!
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