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Gone

Crying between what was
Life is dark; you are pain

Loving

Losing

Sickness

Gone

Just like the wind that blows through the park
So does everything I once was

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  • Soul2b
    June 19, 2008

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    Awww

    I am sorry you feel so gone, but in reality nothing is ever gone, because if it was you wouldn't be here today. Stay Strong, I can tell you ve been through a lot and the best thing about you, is you are stronger to know that you have. stay you


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 13, 2008
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    quite compelling and profound... x