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Passionate Rain

exploring my thirsty body

with the heat

of your fingertips,

 

I drip

with passionate rain

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    July 19
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    Wonderful

    Excellent creation for the contest. So very well done. Congratulations on the gold.


  • ardentMarch gold member
    June 14
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    very beautiful & sensual, Catie...congrats on the gold!

  • celadia
    June 13
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    Beautiful, sensuous

  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    June 13
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    creatively engaging and deeply grasping... x
  • Ennigma
    June 13
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    Ommggg how sensual and beautiful!!!..this reads like a winner..I can feel the finger tips..wow


    • catie052 gold member
      June 13
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      aww..thank you your comment is truely appreciated
      • Ennigma
        June 13
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        congrats on the gold..I knew this poem had a great chance
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