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Nightmare

Nightmarish creatures trapes back and forth
between the closet and the dark place beneath the bed

Shine a light and I fear they will still be there

Just close your eyes tight and try not to hear
their claws clicking as they approach

Ignore the hot sticky breath against your slender neck

Don't even flinch as you hit the floor with a thud
and your body is dragged into those dark places

Because it's only real
if you scream

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  • XRagdollsHavHeartsX
    June 13
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    applauds


  • XRagdollsHavHeartsX
    June 13

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    awesum poem for friday the 13!! i luv the line"but its only real if you scream", i culd feel the whole poem..creepy. hav a wicked friday the 13

  • TheUglySceneGirl...
    June 13
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    WOW very scary and dark Just the way i love it... Great poem my favorite part is when you said "Just close your eyes tight and try not to hear their claws clicking as they approach" that was worded so greatly i can actully picture the whole poem. Kinda reminds me of this nightmare i once had..

    xxx--<3--
    Shelly