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Runaway Conversations and Doodled Wishes

Runaway love. Runaway hearts.
Words scribbled on a mirror.
Wishes doodled on a notebook.
Hearts drawn on my hand.

Head over heels.
Cant stop myself.
I tried to deny it. But I couldnt.
My heart said yes.
My mind said no.

My heart spun around.
My head spun around.
Left for dead.
A heart to bleed out..Lies or love?
No one will ever know.


Can someone save her?
CPR, electric shock.
Or maybe just the boy she loved.






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I havent written in FOREVER..So I am now..

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  • SincerelyMegan
    August 31, 2008

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    I'm not sure about this poem, it kind of confused me.

    Could you maybe elaborate?
    It'd help me understand this better so I can judge it fairly.


  • trekkergirl
    August 31, 2008
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    A very good write. Liked the ending


  • Eyes Wide Shut gold member
    June 13, 2008
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    MY FAVORITE EVER.

    I love it.