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Fire


 


The fire in your eyes
Leaps across the room
And flows under my skin
Through my veins
And into my longing soul.

Instead of telling you,

I want to show you...
Send all your senses
High with each touch

Gentle fingertips graze
The warm flesh of your lips
As I let you lick
The sins of the day.

Grasp my hair
And entangle your fingers
Around my soft locks.
I will mark your words
With touches of fire.

Hate to love me
As I wrap my body
Across your glistening skin.
Claw at my back
With your eyes closed
Gasping for air
Luxuriating in wanton.

Swipe the papers off the table
As you lay my bare body down
And enclose me in your fire.
Rhythmic pants released
And I watch the window
Fogging in the envy of our collision.

I press my palm against the window
Watching my fingers slide down
And mark it with my ecstasy.

The moonlight against my skin
Sends your visions in a delight;
You love to hate it,
Hate to love it.

Sliding against your body
I embrace the senses
That arouse my body
Into an overwhelming
Height of igniting fire;
Fire in your eyes,
It never ends...

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 30

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    wow.. you did a wonderful job.. I really love this.. very hot and sensual in many ways..Lol.. And the metaphors that you used in some places are great! thank you very much for sharing!! I think you did a wonderful job in wooing my lover lol.. best of luck..

    Angel
  • WOW.

    Just wow.
    I felt everything. (And I'm a virgin, pretty good move!)


  • Daredevil
    June 22
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    Well done! I see a trophy coming. Very nice write.
  • I press my palm against the window
    Watching my fingers slide down
    And mark it with my ecstasy.

    Hmm hot steamy sex wow.. lol. This is very descriptive. Love the use of the word fire it pulls across so many emotions that make u tingle. Keep up the good writes. ~brook

  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 13

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    Nice..

    Love it, Love it, Love it, yeah!
    (licks with only puppy breath.)

    -Timothy <<< Dug That Up For You!


  • Zenda-Lokki gold member
    June 13

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    Very sensual with vivid imagery being conjoured with every stanza. Wonderful write hun. Should do well in the contest. I've entered Angelflowers contest for guys x hehe
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