Forking River Dam, Illinois
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John M went camping and took his friend Timmy. Off they went to the Forking River Dam. They went to the Forking Campground near the Forking Dam. They decided to visit the Forking City. They had to go to the Forking Market. It was near the Forking Gas Station closer to the furcating Forking River bending near the Forking swamp turning into the Forking Quicksanding place there where they turned off the Main Forking Road. They turned Forking right there. There is a Forking left turn as well but they had to get to the Forking Store. They bought some Forking Beer made in the Forking Brewery. They were still in Illinois. Forking, Ill. Ill is the abbreviation for Illinois, so we aer all Forking, Ill. For now. The men were Forking camping so they bought some Forking beans made at the Forking beanery. The Forking Meat CO. provided. The Olympic branch of the Mount Olympus Water CO. Donated the Forking Water. They went to the Forking River Motel to steal the soap and the towels. They paid for the room and took two Forking Dam showers. They kept the Forking Dam Ashtray. It has a picture of the Forking Dam River. The Forking Dam Police were searching for the Forking Dam Campground to arrest the Forking men. They were not from Forking at all but just out of townies they had come to Forking Dam to Fish for Forking Fish. They went to the Forking Boat Dock and rented a Forking Boat the Indian Man in charge of the Forking Boat Dock said you out of townies speak with Forking tongue. But money green in Forking Dam. Good to see you Forking men. The Men in Forking Dam City are Forking gay. The Forking City Future Club is Oddfellows Hall.
Eye am Forking, Ill. From all that Forking Fish they gave to me the nibbles and the bites the love all tied up in Forking Ville. They said that visit day is FrYdaY at the Forking Prison Institution they have a Forking Fish fry for religion they want me to go to Forking, Ill. And visit.
Author notes
this is not a true story but ZEN yes it happens every day in rural areas
Prose or Rhyme?
Comments
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Forking Fantastic!
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I think it forking great! If I could give you any kind of suggestion I'd take out all the 'They's.'
For an example:
"They went to the Forking Campground near the Forking Dam. They decided to visit the Forking City. They had to go to the Forking Market"
You already said it was John and Timmy, thus it would be about the them.
An example of the change...
John M went camping and took his friend Timmy. First they wanted to go to the Forking River Dam. Which wasn't far from the Forking Campground.
They'd travel through the Forking City, just stopping at the Forking Market. However while at the Forking Gas Station, they discovered how close to the furcating Forking River bending... [you get the point]
I've seen something similar to this before... It's a cute play on words... Make sure you give a break in paragraph. It will make it easier to read for many here and I think they will find the full enjoyment of this piece.
I forking got it.... and enjoyed the forking read.
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to long
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