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Bet On Love

Dancing away  with my new flame

no one put to shame as we are   great

all the same, kissing and not missing

a beat to the music, defeat no purpose

that we have  planned, the whole clan

is here with a cheer and some beer.

Still toe to toe, nose to nose, lips so

close, we wont miss  a kiss.

Bet our last dime on a horse that

could not run, but come up  a

nice second with its twin that did win.

Now to cover our tracks of betting on

that, we pled with our buddies, not to tell

other ladies, that we are   just fun loving

crazed lovers trying to be undiscovered

betters.

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  • I loved this great job! Loved the metaphore great and very creative!

  • Sherry gold member
    June 13

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    May you win

    This is very happy and upbeat like love is wonderful I hope it last. Love is journey of emotions and seasons but some are truly happy. Although things aren't always perfect sometimes there is a happiness and contentment of couples. I think that must be because of the love which does endure and effort to work on being happy together.Things seem great and wonderful when its new then comes a a season or seasons where that TLC is needed and love even in the storms along the way or trying times. I wish you happiness the both of U. ♥


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 13

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    Clever

    Very creative, and I thought witty!
    Thanks for sharing you my friend, peace!

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~