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Mysterious Light

cloud burst

danced under

shower

 

brightly twinkle

as its tiny wings tumlt

through the drizzle

 

on a stormy night

a mysterious light shine

leaves flutter a buzz

Author notes

3-Haiku:1.2/4/2
2.4/6/4
3.5/7/5

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  • Swan song gold member
    June 14

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    The third haiku though it is full sized 5-7-5 is very strong it has good clear imagery and movemet.
    Well done and thank you for entering.

    • kendhal22 gold member
      June 14
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      thank u

      thank u for the wonderful comments given and the applaudes and the trophy. Yea!!!