The notes my heart are playing
You can’t seem to hear
You go on with your pretty life
While I am stuck here
That invisible piano is playing
Saddest notes ever composed
Everytime you look towards me
I feel oh so exposed
Can you see how you broke my heart?
Can you see the broken strings?
Can you feel how my soul is torn apart?
Can you hear what your ignorance brings?
Violins are playing in the back ground
Notes that have never been played
Bringing tears to those who listen
Hearing about how you have strayed
A heartbroken
Listen carefully
Notes sway in the air
Tears fall from icy eyes
The orchestra tonight will play forever more
Those broken notes you caused
I turned my heartbreak beautiful from what you tore
Can you see what you have given me?
A broken heart and oh so much more
Can you hear the music I made from me?
All which comes back to me and what you tore….
Author notes
this is a poem for however you feel it, watever you feel from it is what it is about.. for me it was about my father.. for others it was about their boyfriends/husbands etc...
Please tell me what you think
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(hoodwinked!)
Romantic angst that can cut through the cold in one's own heart. The questions are ones that all should ask!
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Hood Wink!
The metaphoric sense in this is gripping
I love the depth within as you write the truth of within yourself and the relationship between you and your Dad well
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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Hoodwinked
I think this is beautifully written. So much sadness in these words. I liked your word choice. You have been hoodwinked by a Poetic Bandit.
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HOODWINKED!
A good poem that speaks to evryone on their own level, with a grand theme of music and what feelings really mean.
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Hoodwinked
Such a sad a powerful piece. I really liked your style throughout this piece. Great job dear poet and a great piece that you have penned. Keep it up.
Always write from the heart
Never give up
Kate
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Hood-Wink!
I liked how you continually brought the poem back to what you feel and I think that is why it seems so important when I read it. I liked the music references too. Cheers
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I can so relate to missing my father he abandoned me when I was three months old I am now 49 and two years ago I finally found him but we have yet to meet in person, he left such a big void in my life. It is hard growing up without a father I always wanted to be a Daddy's girl. Your poem is so touching and pulled at my heartstrings. Thanks for sharing. hugs Theresa
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thank u so much.. its nice to know people do know what you mean and understand .. thanks so much xxx
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I feel your pain and heartache in this beautifully written poem. Well done.
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Thank you so much , your comment is much appreciated
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Nice! I don't usually like love poems and heartbreak poems, but this impressed me!! well done!
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Well thank you so much for the compliment , much appreciated
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