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The View

   Im looking down deep

 

 

            From the edge of your heart

 

 

                              You want to join me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Its like a dream no end and no beginning;Madonna

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  • Desire gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: The View
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~
    I kept hearing word: Typical but reference to living for some reason- as if a person would feel right at home with You~ Hearing words: No surprises...
    like a person would not feel out of place or uncomfortable...Nudged to mention what a strong attribute~ also hearing reference to *anxiety* nowwwwwwww for some reason hearing word: driving- something about intersections~ just what I am getting
    after reading Your verse Also hearing phrase: Chin Up
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    You want to join me
    Unique Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    Outstanding!!!

    Best of luck to you in this contest!!!


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    June 13, 2008

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    wow love this darl..says a lot in 15 words, brilliant, hope you do well in the contest


    Cin