Where the sunlight reflects
water, water reflects the sky
and my heart reflects your
love.
Author notes
Credit photobucket
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XV - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 17, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold XVIII - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended August 14, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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How lovely. You said such sweet things in a few words. I am glad to have read this so early in the day. It put a smile on my lips.
Sharon
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Welcome Back!!
Magnificent
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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I feel myself sinking into this picture with your words a calmness and beauty of the world around me lifting my spirit. When your heart is held with love the world is a brilliant place to be. Good luck in the contest.
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Ooooooooooooooooh forgot to add pretty please credit Photobucket for the picture in the AC...Thank You
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Reflections
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept hearing word: Oldsmobile- for some reason I am seeing Peter Pan...like the Peter Pan on the peanut butter
jar- Nowwwwww I am being shown what looks like a homemade cigar- rolled by hand- and being shown the flat uneven paper- hearing: custom made
Beautiful border also-
Also being shown Venus, Italy- and gondolas~
Hopefully that makes some sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...my heart reflects your love
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Excellent
A very fine write, indeed. I like it just as it is. I also wrote a poem titled "Reflection", and it is quite a bit different from yours. If you choose to read it, here's the link for it: http://allpoetry.com/poem/2189136
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simple short and sweet i totally love this!!!
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