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White Sands

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New Mexico's desert was womb for Los Alamos creativity

on the morning of July 16, 1945

upon the emptiness of White Sands testing ground

theory detonated the World's reality.

 

We passed from a time

where war was defined and personal,

battles fought in harsh brutality,

but still a clash that drew blood of soldiers,

never risking the fate of mankind by flights of missles.

 

Weeks later Hiroshima's little sleeping village

in the bomb riddled landscape of Japan

became a name infamous to all,

the place where death came

through means never before imagined.

 

After that explosion

the planet was never the same,

peace from the horror of a world at war,

but at the price of our sense of calm,

entering the Nuclear Age

where we linger in the hallows of anxiety,

quietly suppress those darker thoughts

about how swiftly and uncontrollably

tension among nations

could end with mushroom cloud communication.

 

Living in the hope that sanity will somehow

hold control over those with fingers on red buttons

seeing one's children and grandchildren

and praying the day will never come

when the glow from radiation of cities in ruins

becomes their dying legacy.

Author notes

Prompt: After the Blast
Hope this isn't too long, was hard to shorten too much and preserve the message. 193 words.

Image from http://neatorama.cachefly.net/images/2007-02/nuclear-bomb-badger.jpg

Information from: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Manhattan_Project

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  • Desire gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    Magnificent!!

    Wonderful piece penned Sweetness and Love how You took the prompt~
    I was nudged in a different direction~ but I finally got my quill to do something...almost had to give it CPR

    entering the Nuclear Age
    where we linger in the hallows of anxiety,
    quietly suppress those darker thoughts
    about how swiftly and uncontrollably
    tension among nations
    These lines grabbed~
    When I saw that cloud, I was like Oy!!!
    Would not want to be the recipient of that
    Ooooooooooh Noooooooooo

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Precious
    Best wishes too
    and my Love & Light~ Desire~*~




  • Topaze
    June 13, 2008
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    Thank you for a fine piece, descriptive and factual. For me the scary part of it all is that todays bombs are 10,000 times more powerful than that little baby you have described. It is beyond natural imagination. A great write and a fine piece. Thank you for your wonderful entry in this contest.