Clasped like gold within the palm of nature
a henna tattoo of time.
Foreboding to the unaware
yet striking to the ancient.
It wrenched my limbs from lunacy's edge
yet saved me not from death.
A coal beast of steal
roaring with the ebony smoke,
making you plummet to your end
meeting the days of judgment.
So shall the way of passing be.
So shall it go.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired..... No Prewrites..... by AngelicMistress.
1750 points, ended June 16, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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Hello Poet:
This piece is very well written,
and it depicted all you wished it to.....
clearly, concisely!
I thank you for your submitted piece,
and good luck in the contest.....
Blessed be,
AngelicMistress...Tanya
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Thank you for reading.
Good luck with your contest.
Glad you liked it,
Dashvin
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