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Close the Door








Close the door behind you
it is time for you and I to come together.

The day has been long and hard.
We have walked the thin edge
of too many swords.

Close the door and come to me.
I need to feel the softness of your touch.

Immerse myself into your skin
and taste the sweetness of your breasts.

Close the door and let us come together
Forgetting the world that whirls outside

Let’s ride the waves of passion’s ocean,.
Open the petals of our flowers

Take the pollen of our souls
into each others heart.

Renew ourselves by making love.
Close the door.
                              It is time.





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  • Mad Moon silver member
    June 19

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    ....sigh..... This is beautifully written! Great title (and ending). So many well turned phrases in this, but I simply adore these lines:

    "...We have walked the thin edge
    of too many swords...."

    Well done, my friend! Great use of metaphor here, and throughout this piece. Thanks so much for this great entry, and Good Luck!

  • Olivia33
    June 14
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    Beautiful