Ears turn to deafness
adrenaline pumps high,
walking in the dead zone
where only action talks
Eyes case the rooms
no one is left to chance,
we all know it’s going down
were just looking for the glance
No one moves fast
sweat speaks in volumes
Author notes
Tapestry of silence during chaos
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended June 15, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn your Green Trophies into Bronze, Silver or Gold by FloridaGatorQueen.
600 points, ended June 29, 2008, 63 entries
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Comments
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This is an awesome poem. I love the metaphors and the imagery of this piece. I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Wonderful
very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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