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A Beautiful Vampire

He seek the darken nights, sleep the hottest days.
He hears the softest sounds of the human voice.
He craw and creep around to move faster than anyone.

He feed on the sweet smell of human blood.

 

He looks like a human, so young and beautiful. and always will be.

Sleep with humans. Pretend that he loves making love to women.

The room so hot, so full of sexual energy. Heat and more, 

but most of it is fake, Love; Food to him.

 

The heat stops. His body locks into hers.

His young blue eyes now glow dark red, as his teeth

grew long and sharp..Then he strikes. With force of a demon.

Ripping, biting, and drinking the sweet redness from the

woman's neck and licking the leftovers from her nice breast. 

 

He gets off to the woman's cries 'Please no, Stop!'

He laughs at her as he cleans up his mess he'd made. Leaves her.

Then goes out for a drink or two. When it is all done he's

off to play more games with us, hurting us. 

 

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  • im not broken
    June 14, 2008

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    Really good. I could see the story taking place. you did a good job with this


  • Mrs. Serial Killa
    June 13, 2008

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    Beautifully written, i adored every line clutches to its verses and stayed for tea!

    Great write

    Blessed be,
    Aurua