Flames that scorch:
Empassioned torch.
Melt me with your touch.
A contest entry
- 500 points for 10 words by Unsigned.
950 points, ended June 15, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I just had to say I love the title.
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this is a very good poem! i enjoyed it very much! i wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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lol. I love the title and the metaphor you created here.
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good write
loves fire, I've found it to burn in more ways than one, myself, enjoyed the read.
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Woah powerful words. Nice and good luck!
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love it lol and good luck in the contest lol
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This poem is amazing i love how you have made it hot and sensual without a lot of detials, i like the background you have choosen to put with this wonderful flowing poem, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Thank you much, Amy! Good luck to you as well!
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I like the raw emotion in this.
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I like it..Great job
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I don't know if rhyming in a contest like this one is appropriate for not letting the words limit you, but this is great... the rhyme, although irregular, is not forced.
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interesting...touches you to see what happens...lol
Great write
Simon
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*melts due to Simon's touch*
Geez...thanks a lot, Simon! I warned you this would happen!
=P
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