Innocence swept away
as two hearts become
empowered
as one!
Author notes
Contesst Prompt...
Give me feeling without using the words love, pair, couple, hug, kiss or any form of any of these words...
In a list
A contest entry
- 500 points for 10 words by unsigned.
950 points, ended June 15, 20 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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well i totally understand what you're saying with this...very well penned! i wish you all the best of luck in the contest!
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Innocence is useless anyway.
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two hearts as one
true that , isn't that what love is all about two lovers bonding as one, good write.
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aww quite sweet!
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A light bubbly piece lol good luck lol
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I love the imagery of innocence lol good luck in the contest lol
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Thank You
Hello, I appreciate you stopping by and readuing. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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wow.
brilliant you couldnt have said it any better way.
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The empowerment of love is truly a remarkable thing, is it not?
However, the fact that innocence is "swept away" by love puzzles me a bit. Why is it that innocence cannot remain in the presence of love?
The combination of the hearts really creates desire and longing portrayed in the picture though, and I must say that this poem was quite touching.
Good luck.
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i really love the deitals you have used in this wonderful poem i love the felling and the word empowered brings so much to this short well flowing beautiful poem, i like the background also, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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I like this because the word 'innocence' made me study the picture more closely, to determine that the two people in it are in fact pretty young. I was startled to see that. Good catch!
I love your background, by the way. It's beautiful, yet uncluttered and clean-looking. -
May the love of the innocent last forever. A beaytiful write.
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Beautiful words you have written here.
Great job.
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A little lusty, a little touching, a little sighing... but completely meaningful. I don't have much to say, great one nevertheless.
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Wonderfully put
Good luck
Simon
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Delightfully romantic
Makes the heart soar in beauty so fine
Best of luck hun
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Pretty
Very pretty words here. Good job, Sandy.
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