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Love's Innocence

Innocence swept away
as two hearts become
empowered
as one!

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Contesst Prompt...
Give me feeling without using the words love, pair, couple, hug, kiss or any form of any of these words...



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  • GypsyEyes
    June 14, 2008

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    well i totally understand what you're saying with this...very well penned! i wish you all the best of luck in the contest!
    ~NeeCee


  • sheltered
    June 14, 2008
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    Innocence is useless anyway.


  • Roaddog Wolf
    June 14, 2008
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    two hearts as one

    true that , isn't that what love is all about two lovers bonding as one, good write.


  • DarkStatic
    June 14, 2008
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    aww quite sweet!


  • 2lullabyhaven
    June 14, 2008
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    A light bubbly piece lol good luck lol


  • 2lullabyhaven
    June 14, 2008
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    I love the imagery of innocence lol good luck in the contest lol


    • Sandygram
      June 15, 2008
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      Thank You

      Hello, I appreciate you stopping by and readuing. You take care.

      Bless You,
      Sandy


  • Akari
    June 14, 2008
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    wow.

    brilliant you couldnt have said it any better way.

  • mr cheeseydude
    June 14, 2008

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    The empowerment of love is truly a remarkable thing, is it not?

    However, the fact that innocence is "swept away" by love puzzles me a bit. Why is it that innocence cannot remain in the presence of love?

    The combination of the hearts really creates desire and longing portrayed in the picture though, and I must say that this poem was quite touching.

    Good luck.


  • peridotPixi
    June 14, 2008

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    i really love the deitals you have used in this wonderful poem i love the felling and the word empowered brings so much to this short well flowing beautiful poem, i like the background also, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • Aerden gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    I like this because the word 'innocence' made me study the picture more closely, to determine that the two people in it are in fact pretty young. I was startled to see that. Good catch!

    I love your background, by the way. It's beautiful, yet uncluttered and clean-looking.

  • Papagallo
    June 14, 2008
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    May the love of the innocent last forever. A beaytiful write.


  • craftyangel43
    June 14, 2008
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    Beautiful words you have written here.
    Great job.

  • Kyo-N
    June 14, 2008

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    A little lusty, a little touching, a little sighing... but completely meaningful. I don't have much to say, great one nevertheless.


  • Unsigned gold member
    June 14, 2008
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    Wonderfully put

    Good luck

    Simon


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 13, 2008

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    Delightfully romantic

    Makes the heart soar in beauty so fine


    Best of luck hun
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda

  • midnightblue1272
    June 13, 2008
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    Pretty

    Very pretty words here. Good job, Sandy.

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