Energy shifts
Smiles proceed
Dizzy desires
We both dance tonight
Author notes
10 words
picture prompt - Artist unknown
A contest entry
- 500 points for 10 words by Unsigned.
950 points, ended June 15, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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wow another awesome write from you.... but your always awesome... hugs.. thanks for sharing this and congrats on the HM
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oh yeah this was awesome! i liked it very much! i wish you all the best of luck in the contest!
~NeeCee -
I can relate
I danced last night.
I was dizzy and people were laughing.
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lol...very funny!!
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Lovely take on the prompt...
Best wishes in the contest...
Write on!
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and dance dance dance
loves a celebration very nicely penned
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Very nicely done lol
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Nice simplicity and keeping with the overall theme of the contest (obviously).
I like how "dizzy desires" feeds well into the last line: "we both dance tonight". The dizziness is ambiguous in that it could be a result of love, nervousness, or even dancing.
Well written. Good luck!
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i really love the title you have choosen for this wondeful poem and the nice detials you have put in this, it has a great flow and says so much, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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wow the imagery is really awesome!
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I like this. It tells you what's going on without being sappy. And it's true. (g)
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I like this a lot...it leaves me with the promise of more to come.
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Lusty... really lusty, and with some abstract depictions there, but for some reason I felt like starving for more words from this one. It's still nice, though.
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oh very nice...I love the promise of the chase
Well done
Simon
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Very well done!!! A lovely use of 10 little words!! I find I can never say anything creatively in so few words
Best wishes here....
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S or S?
Ok just a quick note. You have an s on smiles and an s on proceeds... I think you didn't mean to have the s on proceed... I like it other wise!!!
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